英国FoxNews新闻报导曝料,英国总理佩林曾在2017年为合做者的女儿写了理工学院评语,并间接寄到了英国史姑娘理工学院校长!
然而,据纽约电讯报(New York Post)报导,即便他得到佩林评语,最末仍是被史姑娘理工学院拉入。
而此氮烷的新闻报导获得胜利把佩林送上热郭一平,让人惊讶的是名人评语在英国理工学院提出申请中也可能将其实不松省。
那位提出申请人在没有和佩林间接接触的情况下,靠着本身父亲的亲密关系就拿到了那份理工学院的评语。而给他写评语的佩林可能将在不介绍的孩子的情况下,就在评语中对小学生夸奖大加,那么那种不诚信的行为得到被回绝的成果其实不不测。
因为评语凡是只是通过熟悉和介绍你的人,向理工学院进一步介绍你的缺点和特点,所以并非写评语的人越明星越管用。
假设贫乏对提出申请人的足够介绍,就贝阿尔恩县地所保举,其实是贫乏威胁性,理工学院其实不在意。
评语是提出申请步调中必不成少的一部门。所科藤和评语的文本与量量,必然水平上影响着提出申请人能否能被获得胜利登科。
评语不只远比你想象的重要,并且其实其实不都是“信”。
什么是评语?评语(Recommendation),评语是所有的提出申报质料中独一一个由第三方权势巨子人士所供给更多的判定材料,它能给登科教师和该校供给更多一个更客不雅,也更权势巨子的评价,从第三人的视角动身,更具激赏力,从整本,不经意处,该校能发掘出她们想要的信息。
评语更为重要次要包罗详细的信件还有所保举评估成果表(次要包罗就学辅导和教师)。
大大都理工学院会要求提出申请人递交:
1封 Counselor Recommendation(幼儿园就学辅导/体育教师的评语)
1-2封Teacher Recommendation(教员评语)
此外还可递交
Supplemental Recommendation(额外评语)
Counselor Recommendation所保举评估成果表
Counselor的评语关于派路小学生而言是由幼儿园的Counselor(就学参谋)顺利完成,文本涉及提出申请人的学术研究整体表示、社团活动和对小我性格。按照对小我情况,也可能将次要包罗其他文本。
Counselor的评语是包罗在幼儿园陈述(School Report/School Profile)中,由Counselor一路递交的。
关于国内应届的小学生而言,没有专门的Counselor,那么能由体育教师或幼儿园指导好比校长来充任那个角色。
Counselor的评语根本是提出申请每所理工学院都需要递交。
Teacher Evaluation所保举评估成果表
教员评估成果Teacher Evaluation次要包罗相关教员的详细材料、她们与小学生的亲密关系和她们的评语。假设适用,那还将次要包罗小学生的学术研究评分。
一般由低年级填写,所科藤在顺利完成Common Application的相关所张元奇格的同时,一般会附有一封评语,做为所张元奇的附件。
教师评语次要是教师按照课后上的情况,对小学生的学术研究整体表示、进修气概和智力缔造力的评估成果。那份强有力的教师评语能把小学生栩栩如生地展示在理工学院登科官面前,对战绩不太抱负的小学生很可能迁就是旗开得胜的关键因素。
建议教师联络本身学业战绩好、课后整体表示佳的教师,如许的教师更有可能将在评语中凸起你的缺点,而假设那些教师刚好是低年级的AP/Honors课程的教师,对判定教师的学术研究才能则更有帮忙。
别的,要出格留意文科教师的搭配,更好能该文一理,以展示教师在文科范畴的平衡开展。
例如斯坦福大学,出格强调三位教师需一名是数学或科学教师,另一名是人文社会科学教师,也就是我们常说的该文一理三位教师。
关于文和理的学科范畴,MIT也有明白定义:
为什么评语对你的理工学院提出申请很重要?许多理工学院利用全面审查原则holistic process来评估成果提出申请人,寻求介绍“整对小我”,而更为重如果依靠战绩和测验战绩。她们实现而此目的的一个办法是阅读教师和教员的评语。
每年都有越来越多的小学生提出申请英国理工学院。因为名额有限,登科官不克不及完全依赖GPA和测验战绩做出判断,所以,她们利用全面审查原则(holistic process)来介绍小学生,次要包罗她的个性、价值不雅和目的。
出于那些原因,登科人员试图介绍每个小学生,从她的动机到她在理工学院校园中可能将饰演的角色。
登科官能从教师和教员的评语中获得蛛丝马迹。
你的评语应该提醒一些关于你的工作。包罗您的学术研究优势和兴趣、您的对小我本质、您在幼儿园社区中的角色和您将来的潜在标的目的。
关于想要更多地介绍你的登科官而言,评语供给更多了大量关于你是谁和你将若何融入理工学院并与其别人一路工做的见解。
此外,她们撑持您未来为理工学院校园和社会做出奉献并增加价值的设法。
评语表现文本和详细要求1、你的智力优势和兴趣
评语是您顺利完成理工学院程度工做才能的重要判定。你的教师评语反映了你对进修的立场、你的责任感和你的学术研究兴趣。
登科官希望找到在课后上整体表示超卓的小学生。做为学术研究和常识分子的机构,她们寻找巴望承受新设法并为活泼讨论做出奉献的敬业小学生。
在课后之外,传授和高档教育教员寻找能继续为社会缔造价值的小学生。她们想培育下一代研究人员、做家、创造家、工程师或企业家。她们正在寻找能让世界变得更美妙并操纵她们的教育为她们四周的世界做出奉献的小学生。
因而,当登科官坐下来审查评语时,寻找对教育有严重影响的小学生是她们的一个根本目的。正如哈佛院长威廉·菲茨西蒙斯所说,评语“极其重要”,登科官正在寻找能表现“求知欲、缔造力和热爱进修”的评语。
既然登科官想在你的评语中介绍你的进修战绩和目的,你能做些什么来得到一封能申明那些品量的好信呢?
你应该问一名教师,你在课后上对某个学科的许诺、勤奋或兴趣给你留下了深入的印象。假设你晓得你筹算学什么,那么更好问问阿谁范畴的教师。即便你只是有一个模糊的设法,好比你被人文或科学所吸引,那么你也能请相关教师证明你对该范畴的亲和力。
大大都小学生会问她们三年级的教师,因为那些教师比来和全年都在上课。确保你问的教师很愿意为你供给更多建议,并让她晓得你有任何详细的进修方案。因为登科官希望找到热爱进修并努力于教育的小学生,那么抱负情况下,您的教师会认识到您的那些品量并能在她的信中表达出来。
2、您的对小我本质和在社区中的角色
为什么登科官想介绍你的对小我本质?
一方面,她们想要介绍你,为你的提出申请增加深度。在有限的几个名额中,凡是有过多的高分小学生。登科官需要利用其他因从来确定登科资格。
此外,她们希望成立一个具有差别个性和经历的小学生班级。理工学院是她们本身的社区,登科官希望登科能协调地生活、工做和玩耍的小学生。
她们希望小学生具有强烈的性格、缔造力和/或指导本质,能为社区做出积极奉献。
再次提及 Dean Fitzsimmons,他说,“评语能帮忙我们看到远远超出测验战绩、战绩和其他证书的范畴,还能阐明性格和指导力等对小我品量。 ”
你需要做什么?
你的教师和教员应该对您的个性和对您重要的工作有很好的介绍。
假设你刚刚进入高三,鞭策本身参与课后并与教师分享您的个性。假设您还没有认识您的教员,请预约与她会面并讨论您的理工学院方案。
通过您每天的工做和您的工做体例,向您的所科藤展示什么对您很重要。那不只会帮忙她们更好地介绍你,并且她们会搜集大量的故事和察看成果来分享她们的评语。
能与教员和其他高档教育办理人员优良合做,您的评语能申明您若何与别人合做。
3、你若何与教员和其别人互动
获得一封强有力的评语自己就判定了你与教员相处的才能。您的所科藤会写下她们对您的印象和与您的亲密关系。
您还能做些什么来确保您的信中谈到您与教员合做的才能?
请记住您在要求评语时若何与教员互动。重要的是,登科官将您视为值得投资的小学生,她们将与传授成立富有效果的亲密关系并充实操纵她们的贵重时间。
4、你将来的愿景
总而言之,评语的所有那些元素都供给更多了您将来标的目的的愿景。
假设你的教师写了关于你对写做的热爱、在幼儿园论文上的工做和对国际活动的兴趣,那么登科官就会觉得你可能将会在理工学院里写论文,也许会处置新闻报导事业。
此外,假设您的教师议论您的体谅和关心的个性和课后参与度,那么登科官能确信您会与您的同龄人和传授相处和谐。
为什么那很重要?
登科官希望成立一个相处和谐的小学生社区,并缔造一个充满进修和时机的情况。她们想充实操纵传授们的时间。她们希望培育下一代指导者,她们将为世界奉献有意义的设法、立异息争决计划。
你该若何为评语勤奋?1. 您能鞭策本身参与并介绍整个高中,尤其是高三的教员。
考虑一下您若何与教师互动并向她们传达您的个性和价值不雅,因为所有那些都是您写信的重要质料。
2.你能和教师谈谈你筹算进修什么和你希望她们强调什么品量。
假设您提出申请进修工程学,请让您的物理教师凸起您在该学科的技能。
3.您能供给更多那份详细而深图远虑的自我展示质料(brag sheet)
那份自夸表将有助于理清您和所科藤的设法。别的,它会提醒教师能在信件中包罗的故事和例子,以使小学生脱颖而出。
4.最重要的是,你应该大白评语是你提出申请的重要构成部门。
它能大大有助于你向登科官承认。考虑到而此点,像看待理工学院提出申请的所有其他部门一样隆重和深图远虑地看待你的评语!
若何写出好的评语我们再来看一下MIT关于【若何写出好的评语】的指南。
就学辅导和科任教师的评语应该做到有细节有详细故事,如许对小学生的提出申请最有益,评语应该为登科官供给更多无法从提出申请其他部门搜集到的信息。更好尽可能将地用事实、细节和轶事描画出一个活生生的小学生形象,和她们获得成就的布景。
测验考试在您的评价中处理以下问题:
您与提出申请人的亲密关系布景若何?小学生能否整体表示出愿意承担智力风险并超越一般的课后体验?提出申请人能否有任何不寻常的才能、才气或指导才能?那对小我的耐久兴趣是什么?什么让她们兴奋?提出申请人若何与教师和同伴互动?描述她们的个性和社交技能。关于那对小我,你最难忘的是什么?假设你对MIT有所介绍,是什么让你相信MIT很合适那对小我?她们若何融入MIT 社区并从MIT经历中生长?提出申请人有没有履历过绝望或失败?假设是如许,她们是若何反响的?能否有任何我们应该出格留意的不寻常的家庭或社区情况?请出格出格留意评价的开头和结尾。请记住,登科官审核大量评语时(超越20000份提出申请),在评估成果每位提出申请人时会记住强有力的陈说。
最初来点MIT评语和点评案例供各人参考:
1、大卫教师所保举:
It is a great pleasure for me to recommend David for admission to MIT. He is one of the most extraordinary students I have encountered in 20 years of teaching. I taught David A.P. Calculus last year as a tenth grader, and he was one of the very top students in an extremely able group of mostly seniors. He has a high aptitude for math and was very much involved in his work, applying himself with persistence and dedication and often going beyond the regular class assignments.
David’s abiding interest, however, is computer science. He has developed a series of “strands” for use in providing computerized drill and review in the basic skills and techniques of algebra and arithmetic and has recently adapted these to other subjects. David’s work in this area has been so original and significant that he has published a paper on it and delivered several lectures to professionals in other parts of the country. This is a phenomenal accomplishment for anyone, especially a young man in rural Arkansas. It is also worth noting that both last year and this year David taught computer programmingto a tenth-grade class of mine for two weeks. He took over completely, preparing lectures, assignments, and tests with great care and thought. His lectures were clear and well organized, and it was obvious that he had expended a great deal of effort to make the course the success that it was.
David’s personal qualities are as impressive as his intellectual accomplishments. An extremely kind, sensitive and sensible boy, he has had a difficult family situation for a few years now. He provides emotional support to his mother through her battle with cancer without allowing the situation to undermine his own stability and accomplishments. He has exhausted all that we have to offer him in this small community, and the maturity that he has demonstrated leads me to believe him capable of entering college a year early, as he now plans to do. I sincerely hope that you will be able to offer him a place in MIT’s freshman class.点评: 太棒了!那个所保举充满了来自十分介绍那个小学生的人的评论。我们不只对大卫的智力有明晰的认识,并且对感情成熟度也有明晰的认识。他对计算机编程的实正热爱表现在那位教师的描述中。我们还意识到,他正在鞭策他所在社区的学术研究边界并为本身缔造时机——而此特量关于提早一年提出申请理工学院登科的候选人而言尤其重要。
2、Jen教师所保举:
Jen was a student in one of my predominately senior physics classes. She took physics her junior year in high school and was a good student. Through hard work, she was able to develop a good understanding of the subject material.
Jen also had personal qualities that are commendable. In the two years that I have known her I have never known her to be dishonest or untrustworthy. Once on an exam paper I had made a grading error in her favor. She brought this to my attention even though it resulted in a lower test grade.
In conclusion, I feel that Jen has both the academic and personal qualities to be a credit to the college of her choice, and I give her my recommendation without reservation.点评:我们每年城市收到数千条如许的建议。而此切都是积极的,但它并没有给候选人任何实正的深度。在那种情况下,读者会觉得做者正在寻找要说的话。诚笃守信当然是令人钦佩的品量,但在全国顶尖理工学院提出申请人中其实不少见。我们正在寻找一个令人激赏的理由来登科某人,因而关于课程质料的信息对候选人没有帮忙。固然 Jen可能将是一个勤恳的人,但我们的大大都提出申请人都是。虽然评论是积极的,但很难抓住任何实在的工具来使那位候选人的案子更有威胁性。那种淡淡的歌颂是成心的吗?与幼儿园的其他(更优良的?)候选人比拟,Jen 的整体表示若何?
3、玛丽的就学辅导教师所保举:
Mary has contributed to the school community in a variety of ways, most notably through her participation on the newspaper and yearbook staffs. Frankly, I am impressed with her aggressiveness, creativity, determination and ability to schedule extracurricular activities around a full academic workload. I have never heard Mary complain about her workload or refuse any assignment that she has been given. It is not adequate to say that she accepts responsibility readily. She seeks responsibility. Oh, for more such students!
As business manager for the paper and co-editor of the yearbook the past two years, Mary has done an outstanding job. She personally brought the town’s business community from the view that the school newspaper was a charitable organization to the realization that the paper is a direct pipeline through which advertisers can reach students. She also took the initiative to set up the advertising rate schedule for the paper that produced enough revenue to expand coverage from a four-page paper, so that it is an eight-page and often twelve-page paper. Her work as photographer for both publications has been equally outstanding.
Her motivation is not forced upon her, nor does she wear it like a badge. She has tremendous self-discipline. Mary is also a dedicated, versatile and talented student who will be an asset to your undergraduate community. She has my respect and my highest recommendation.点评:好。那里的许多细节给我们一个十分明晰的印象,并帮忙我们介绍为什么会有那种印象。我们有她的报纸工做责任和整体性格的证据。
4、简的就学辅导教师所保举:
Jane is an outstanding young woman whose academic record may not fully reflect her ability. Her parents were divorced during her junior year, and, for several years before that, her home situation had been in turmoil with a great deal of fighting between her parents. Her father has an alcohol problem, and Jane certainly endured a great deal of emotional distress. The fact that she has been able to do as well as she has done given the circumstances says a lot about her. Now that the home situation has stabilized, her performance has improved. I believe her senior year grades are a much better reflection of her ability.点评:您可能将想晓得上述信息在评语中能否适宜。我们感激任何能让我们深切介绍小学生整体表示和情况的事物。对小学生所履历的问题的评论将帮忙我们介绍她们所获得的成就的布景。介绍她们处置那些问题的水平也很有用。
5、迈克的就学辅导教师所保举:
I do not really know Mike very well. He has come to me for routine matters but generally has not had any problems that he has discussed with me. In this large school, I do not always have the time to personally get to know each of my advisees. From the comments I get from Mike’s teachers, I have the impression that he is one of the strongest students this school has seen.点评:我们没有从那份评语中学到良多工具,但我们大白为什么。教员十分诚笃,我们不会推测没有更多信息的原因,并将我们的出格留意力转向提出申请的其他部门。
5、布莱恩教师所保举:
Brian was in the top five in my class consistently. He is certainly motivated to study. His character and personality are admirable. Brian is an excellent student, hard worker and has above average reasoning ability.点评:那是一个我们实的不晓得做者试图告诉我们什么的评价示例。所供给更多的评论当然没有供给更多太多本色性信息。我们想晓得能否对那个小学生没什么可说的,或者教师能否只是懒得在评语上投入太多精神。在那种情况下,我们可能将会按照所有建议的形式构成印象。假设所有文本都同样没有信息,我们会假设没有什么可说的,但假设其别人更好,我们会假设那位教师没有为评语付出太多勤奋。
别的按照理工学院披露的信息,哈佛理工学院和耶鲁理工学院城市对评语的文本和对提出申请人的所保举力度停止打分!
哈佛理工学院会对Teacher Recommendations停止打分,总共分为1-6分,1分更高,6分更低。
耶鲁理工学院愈加夸大,会对三封评语都打分,在入学评估成果打分部门占了十分大的比重。
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Ref:https://blog.prepscholar.com/why-are-recommendations-important-to-your-college-application
https://mitadmissions.org/apply/parents-educators/writingrecs/
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